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- February 28, 2016 at 11:15 pm #152194AnonymousInactive
OOC: Apologies for starting this with a known NPC, this was the starting point of the story stuck in my head, and I wasn’t sure where to start it otherwise.
Also, while written in segments, the story is now completely told. If you’re just getting started and would like a single document version of it rather than paging through the forums, drop me a PM and I’m happy to send it.
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The gladiator known as The Mountain once again found himself in one of the rooms of the Tomal Khan’s palace. As before the room was exquisitely appointed, with comfort to be found at every turn. Fruits, wine and other potent beverages were readily at hand, but lay untouched. He was clean and wearing his best. The Champion’s Chain of gold and Agamassi claws spoke to his victory in the Arena Varria some time ago. He had alternated sitting and pacing, anxious about his meeting with Nasha and though she was a tall woman, at more than eight feet in height, there were few he didn’t tower over. As he paused in his pacing there was a knock at the door and Nasha entered. He dropped to a knee as a sign of respect and she smiled in response. “Please, sit.”
Both moved to appropriate chairs and once settled she broached the subject that brought them there. “So, have you decided?”
“A bride. If a fitting one can be found,” The Mountain replied in a humble voice.
Nasha’s expression was unreadable. She studied the large man sitting opposite her for a time. “And what would make for a fitting bride?”
“One who sees me for who I am.”
The response seemed to amuse Nasha. “It would appear there is more to you than many believe.”
The Mountain nodded in response.
“Did you know I saw the fight where you won the Champion’s Chain you wear around your neck? An impressive match. Your antics reminded me a bit at times of those of the Laughing Vipers. It’s not your success in the arena you refer to,” she shakes her head. “You were one of Felix’s Irregulars in the 6th Crusade of Light, but it’s not your prowess in battle. I have heard of your generosity with the dark-kin in Milandir who were victims of mistreatment and your gentle way with children both here in the First City and beyond. I think that is a bit closer to what you mean, but not quite it, is it?”
Once again The Mountain nodded.
The Dorai of the Tomal Khan held the The Mountain’s gaze and waited for him to speak.
“I want someone who can tell I’m not just what they see. I can be that person, and smile on the outside, but be sad on the inside. At some point she would become sad too. I don’t want that,” the words spoken were simple and heart felt.
“And if I cannot find such a woman for you, what reward do you ask?”
“Nothing.”
The response surprises her. “Nothing?”
The Mountain shakes his head. “You will have tried. I don’t expect it to be easy. People think I’m big and stupid. As simple as the children I like to play with. Can’t read, not good with words, and scary because of how big I am and how dangerous I can be. People laugh at me because of it. I like to help people. Some people know that, some don’t. Some think I’m gullible because of that. It’s ok. I can smile. This is how people see me. My wife would need to know me and know what everyone else sees and be ok. I don’t want her sad.”
Nasha nods in understanding. “And will you tell me what it is that most people don’t see?”
A moment of panic passes as The Mountain closes his eyes and takes a deep breath. He nods then answers, “Yes. Please don’t tell anyone though, except perhaps the Tomal Khan. If they don’t see it, it’s better that way, ok?”
She once again nods in response. He smiles anxiously and then answers the question she asked. His voice is steady if quiet, not looking to carry past the woman in the room. There is a sense of confession with it and at the end he looks at her with a resigned expression, awaiting judgement.
“You know what you want and are willing to risk much to get it. You are right, finding you a wife will not be as easy as I had thought. Still, among the many I could have offered, there are some that may work.”
Nasha stands gracefully, indicating an end to this audience. “Return to the city and await my summons. You have my thanks for supporting my cause, no matter how this search for a bride ends.” She smiles at him and then exits the room, leaving The Mountain to a time of reflection and waiting.
To be continued…
February 29, 2016 at 1:23 am #271717AnonymousInactiveI like it, looking forward to part two
February 29, 2016 at 2:26 am #271718frootsnaxParticipantNice!
February 29, 2016 at 5:01 am #271719AnonymousInactiveLove it!

part two …
Part Two …
PART TWO !!!
March 1, 2016 at 8:21 pm #271739AnonymousInactiveHe arrived at the appointed time, clean and presentable and was ushered into Nasha’s presence. The setting and her attire were a touch more formal than before, and her smile while genuine a bit more distant. What lay before them was a matter of importance, and as before he dropped to a knee in deference to her position. At a nod the guards withdrew beyond the doorways, close at hand but not privy to the conversation.
Seeing he grasped the seriousness of the discussion her smile warmed a bit. “You look well,” she said and gestured for him to rise.
The Mountain returned the smile as he stood, “And you look regal.”
Nasha inclined her head, accepting the compliment. “I have found several who I believe may be what you seek. All are interested in meeting you. It is nice to have the luxury to meet both the needs of the Court and the happiness of my family. Though should you marry and make them miserable…” the tone was light, almost joking, but the stated threat most real.
He nodded in acknowledgement.
“Very well. You shall be our guest for the next three days. During which you will spend time with each of them and by the end of the third day I expect an answer. Should it be marriage, we will arrange for the happy occasion quickly. Should you not find what you’re looking for, then once again you leave with our thanks.”
“I have told them this is a matter I am considering and by no means certain. Each knows there are others I am considering but not necessarily who, though they may guess. All are talented, well-educated and beautiful. Treat them well,” she pauses a moment to ensure the instructions are emphasized before continuing.“The first you shall meet is Arya. She is ambitious and aids in the running of the Court. Few have her knowledge of the various individuals who seek to apply their influence here either from within or without. She is also a talented musician with a beautiful voice.”
“Next you shall meet Roshni. Her interests are varied, lacking a central focus. This breadth has made her an excellent tutor for other members of the family. She’s more impulsive than the others but is one of the brightest and most helpful.”
“After Roshni you will meet Shirin,” she smiled a bit as she mentioned the name. “Shirin is a warrior, trained to fight from horseback and afoot. She may offer to spar with you but be warned, she is known to show up those who underestimate her.”
“After Shirin you will meet Vashti. She has followed her father into the merchant trade. Her father is a well-known and respected horse trader. The tack that Vashti makes and provides is all any true horseman can ask.”
“Finally you will meet Ruana. She is the most studious of the five and fascinated by the First City and its history. Though a bit more reserved in general than the others, she is as passionate as any with the things that truly interest her.”
“You will learn more of them when you speak, but I thought it well to provide some background before beginning. I have provided each of them some information about you and answered their questions within reason. Do you have any questions before meeting Arya?”
The Mountain paused for a moment considering. “How will I meet the next one and what happens when I’ve met all of them?”
“Once done with one of them the guards will help arrange for your next meeting, either bringing them to you or taking you somewhere to meet them. Once you have met each of them, you may request more time with any of them and arrangements will be made. They may also send you messages which will be kept until an appropriate time. They are aware that you’re not literate and that any message will be voiced aloud.”
“Will I see you over the next three days?”
Nasha shook her head. “Not unless the need is great. There is much I must attend to.”
The Mountain nodded then remained quiet.
“Very well. The guards will take you to the gardens to where Arya awaits you. We will speak again soon.”
Dismissed The Mountain once again offered his respects and left. Two guards met him as he stepped outside the room, one leading and one trailing. He was reminded of the long tunnels he would go through to enter the arena and wondered whether Larissa would smile upon him and bring him victory in his pursuits. Only time would tell.
To be continued…
March 3, 2016 at 6:57 pm #271780AnonymousInactiveThe guards led The Mountain through the palace and out to the gardens. The day was warm, and the breeze carried a mixture of scents both familiar and foreign. Turning a bend in the path he saw a regal young woman resplendent in the white and gold of the Maghir. The lead guard stepped aside allowing for The Mountain to pass. As he moved closer she stood and smiled. Arya had dark eyes and dark brown hair, kept from her eyes with jeweled pins, but otherwise down and stirred by the breeze. She was taller than many of the Maghir women he had seen, but not exceptionally so. She seemed a bit younger than he, probably in her late teens.
As he reached an appropriate distance he stopped, drawing himself up as if presenting himself to the crowd in an arena. “I am…The Mountain,” he stated in his deep bass voice. Smiling down at her he asked, “Are you Arya?”
Arya seemed amused at The Mountain’s introduction, one fitting an arena, but out of place in such a circumstance. “I am, and very pleased to meet you,” she replied. Her voice was rich and a pleasure to the ear, just as Nasha had promised. She gestured to a bench and then sat quickly once it was obvious The Mountain would do likewise. Her excitement was clear and she leaned in a bit when she spoke.
“The Dorai of the Tomul Khan has told me she is considering a marriage between you and one of our household. She has also said I am one of the ones she may match you with. I have heard something of your deeds and your service to the Tomul Khan, but am anxious to hear from you about your adventures. Will you tell me?”
The Mountain smiled. “Of course! Should I start with helping the Tomul Khan? Or maybe you’d rather me start with my victories in the arena. I could talk about the war, but wars aren’t any fun. Lots die. Or do you want me to talk about helping people? I like to help people,” he added with pride and an eagerness to see where she wanted to begin.
The simple, almost child-like response seemed to surprise her a bit, though she covered it well. “Why don’t you start with your victories in the arena. I understand the chain you wear was earned there?”
The Mountain’s eyes opened wide showing his own excitement. “Yes! This is a champion’s chain. I got this after beating a REALLY BIG ss’ressen. He was even bigger than me, though not by a lot. Both of us had beaten a lot of opponents to get to the end. And there we were, he with his axe and me with my trident. The battle was really tough! It wasn’t supposed to be to the death, but he wouldn’t give up and I didn’t want to die. He killed all of his other opponents. That’s sad. So we started out by waving to the crowd…”
The story was a favorite and one told often. He gestured and posed, then got up and did some of the acrobatics as he had performed them in the arena. Arya smiled and laughed at his antics which only seemed to encourage him further. Eventually he climaxed with the final blow and added a roll across the ground to a one knee pose as a flourish and punctuation. He seemed unaware or unconcerned about the dirt he accumulated on his outfit. Arya cheered at the conclusion.
“And so when they asked me about a chain to commem…celebrate the victory, I asked for it to be made from his axe, claws and head spine as a way to honor him. They added the gold, as a champion’s chain is supposed to have gold. I think it looks pretty,” he looked up at her for confirmation and she nodded. He told her stories of other bouts within the arena, but it was clear the battle against the Agamassi was his favorite. She asked questions and occasionally seemed puzzled by the answers he gave.
“Can you tell me about your adventures? I heard you helped some dark-kin in Milandir among other things.”
“Sure! But can you sing first? I hard you have a beautiful voice,” he asked eagerly.
She smiled at his reaction and began to sing one of the ballads of her people. The first note rang out clear and pure as did the rest that followed. Her range was impressive as was her expressiveness. She sang to him and he watched her in turn, smiling his encouragement. When the song reached its end he applauded, “So you speak Maghir?” she asked in Maghir. The Mountain looked confused so she switched back to Low Coryani. “Do you speak Maghir?” she repeated.
The Mountain shook his head. “No. Why?”
“You seemed very focused and nodded a bit.”
He seemed surprised. “I did?”
“Yes.”
“You sing well, and I could just feel the story in how you sang it.”
“I see,” Arya seemed to file that away. Letting go of whatever thought lingered, she invited him again to tell of his adventures with the dark-kin in Milandir.
“Oh. That’s a sad story,” he stated, his face becoming somber as he thought about it. “Are you sure you want to hear it?”
“Please.”
He sighed a bit. “Ok,” and with that began the tale. It started with he and some companions sent on an errand to investigate a situation in Milandir and discovering a dark-kin near dead by the side of the road. Through it he sat, the animation displayed in previous tales gone as this one was more dark and somber. As the story unfolded, Arya asked many questions about the dark-kin and The Mountain’s role in helping the dark-kin get settled into a new life. As he told her of other adventures including aiding the Tomal Khan, she continued her questioning. The enthusiasm she showed when they first met replaced with a more reserved and pensive demeanor.
After bringing a particular story to a conclusion, The Mountain addressed her, “Do I get to ask questions, too?”
The question surprised her. “Of course.”
“What do you do here?” when it was clear his question wasn’t understood he tried again. “In the Golden Court. What do you do?”
With that Arya spoke of her life within the court, how she aided the master of ceremonies and was consulted in matters of etiquette and occassionally politics. The Mountain had a hard time grasping all the different things she did and interrupted with questions. They were simple questions and often blunt, though softened by the fact that they were asked without challenge.
The conversation wandered from her work to her extended family. When Arya mentioned Khan Forso, The Mountain looked uphappy and blurted out that he thought Khan Forso was a bad man and Arya agreed. She looked at him a bit oddly after that exchange and their discussion moved from family to music. She studied at the Academy of Epics and Songs and she told him of the masters she had worked with there. They lapsed into silence and before either could speak further one of the guards approached.
Offering the appropriate respects he addressed them, “Apologies for the intrusion. The Mountain is expected elsewhere soon and it would not be well for him to be late.”
The Mountain stood and offered Arya a hand to rise which she accepted. Once standing, he gently covered hers with his other hand. “This was nice. Can we talk again soon?”
Arya looked up at The Mountain with a curious expression on his face. “Yes, that would be nice.” She spoke slowly seeking something in his face.
He smiled broadly. “Good! We will speak soon. Goodbye!” he said and turned to go.
“Goodbye, Mountain.”
The Mountain turned back and his eyes opened wide as if she’s said something wrong. “Not Mountain. The Mountain. Mountain’s not here,” he spoke with all sincerity.
Unsure if a jest or not, Arya smiled in response. “Of course, The Mountain. We will speak again soon.”
With that the guards led The Mountain away, off to his next appointment.
To be continued…
March 4, 2016 at 1:47 pm #271792AnonymousInactiveThoroughly enjoying the story. Looking forward to the next instalment.
March 7, 2016 at 5:24 pm #271812AnonymousInactiveGreat story telling!
March 11, 2016 at 2:15 am #271883AnonymousInactiveThey made their way out of the gardens and back into the palace where they headed upstairs to one of the suites. The lead guard knocked then stepped aside. A female voice from inside called “Enter,” as The Mountain reached the door. As he entered the room the trailing guard took up station on the other side of the door within easy call but once again out of earshot.
As with the other suites he had been in this one was luxuriously appointed, though he had little time to notice before discovering the sole occupant of the room semi-reclined on a large couch. While he had been assured all of the women would be beautiful, Roshni was truly breathtaking. He paused, caught off-guard by her appearance, which granted her the opportunity to smile and rise. Standing she was taller than Arya, her thick black hair artfully arranged and large brown eyes that called to be drowned in. Her outfit was designed to flatter and impress and while not as provocative as a Larissan’s, it was enticing.
Recovering from his surprise he offered her a glorious smile, and pulling himself up to his full height announced himself. “I am…The Mountain,” he stated boldly.
Roshni grinned at his statement and moved to stand close before him. “Good afternoon, The Mountain. I am Roshni, and very pleased to meet you,” reaching out she took his hand and tugged gently. “Why don’t we sit and be comfortable, hmmm?”
She led him over to the couch and once seeing him seated retrieved a plate and goblet of wine and returned with it. “I thought you might be hungry, so I assembled some choice selections for your pleasure. I hope they meet with your satisfaction.” She sat down close to him on the couch, her leg next to his.
“I’m sure they will.”
“Wonderful! Then you should have some now,” and she picked up one of the delicacies before he could reach for any and brought it to his lips. “Allow me,” and with a nod of ascent she began to feed him. It was done at a slow pace allowing him to savor the various fruits and foods, while providing him commentary on what they were.
“I heard you were a tutor. What do you teach?”
Roshni smiled mischeviously, “Why whatever I think they need to learn. I’m sure there are things I could teach you as well.”
“You teach what all those funny squiggles mean?”
She laughed. “You mean writing?” The Mountain nodded.
“Yes, I speak eight languages fluently and write in them as well. I’ve studied history, religion, art, architecture, music and a variety of other subjects. Whatever catches my interest I pursue passionately,” she noted pointedly.
“You for instance have me intrigued. I’ve seen several of your bouts here in the First City, including the one where you got that lovely champion’s chain,” as she spoke she reached out and glided her hand down the long headspine and down part of his chest before withdrawing it. “I have heard of your exploits in Almeric, in Milandir and even here within the First City and the various children you have entertained and assisted along the way. I can name the opponent you faced where you got this scar on your arm,” tracing it with her finger. “You strike me as a powerful man full of life, compassion and conviction. You have a flare for the dramatic, and an unflagging energy,” she rested a hand lightly on his arm, “that is most impressive. Should we be matched, I will certainly do my best to keep up. Still, I understand that may be difficult, so I may need assistance.”
Roshni clapped her hands twice and a door to one of the inner rooms of the suite opened. Stepping out of the room was a beautiful, provocatively dressed dancer likely from Milandir or Almeric. Amongst her various jewelry was the golden coin holy symbol of Larissa dangling on a short chain around her neck. She smiled invitingly at The Mountain, though addressed Roshni. “Your will, mistress?”
Roshni glided across the room recovering an instrument and looked at The Mountain. “Given your penchant for pageantry I thought the lovely Brigit would make a fitting and energetic opening act, with myself as the main attraction…” her voice trailed off and her bold confidence faded as she looked at The Mountain.
Up until Brigit entered, The Mountain had been curious and had been very attentive as Roshni had explained her training and teachings. It moved to puzzlement when she stood and clapped, then surprise when Brigit entered. What was evident through his surprise was the mixture of emotions behind it. His posture became more guarded, eyes narrowing, there was a flash of anger, disappointment and others less distinct, in the end his expression softened. He stood, “I think it’s time for my next appointment. Thank you for spending time with me.”
His dismissal finally stirred movement in Roshni again, “I’m sorry. I didn’t see, I thought but it didn’t… can we talk?” Her speech was fragmented as if her mind’s thoughts were triggering the next utterance before the former could be completed. Her demeanor spoke of sincere regret.
“Those who rely too much on the sight of others often fail to see what is before them,” he replied. Mixed with the rebuke there was a note of sorrow in his voice and while it was the same voice it was spoken differently.
He offered her a bow as a sign of respect for her position, then opened the door and stepped out without another word or glance back. As he came through the guards on either side of him nodded then fell into position as they headed away, The Mountain paused and asked, “Can we get something to eat? I’m hungry and don’t want to meet someone on an empty stomach. What if my stomach started rumbling? That would be bad.”
With a chuckle the guards changed course and headed for lunch.
To be continued…
March 11, 2016 at 11:39 pm #271908AnonymousInactiveLunch was a festive affair with the guards leading him towards the kitchens. On their way one of the guards sent a servant to discover where Shirin would be after lunch. After they arrived, The Mountain insisted they eat as well, and with a bit of persuasion they joined him. The foods were standard fare but made well and The Mountain’s appreciation was reflected in his appetite and profuse appreciation to the cooks. During the meal he and the guards swapped stories of fights and duties. Towards the end they brought out some sweets which he gleefully ate, eliciting chuckles from the various women. As they headed back to the kitchens their conversation could be overheard with the eldest saying, “…so remember, they may look like grown men, but they’re really just oversized boys.” The Mountain and the guards looked at each other and laughed.
Once again they returned outdoors, though not to the gardens. Instead The Mountain was led to an open area where multiple targets were set up. On the field facing away from them was a woman sitting atop an impressive warhorse. She wore a well-made and well used chain hauberk and carried a recurved short bow. Still some distance away they paused as she spurred her horse forward into a gallop as she approached the targets she let loose two arrows striking the near the center of each of two targets. Reaching the far end, she wheeled her horse and brought it back, this time striking two of the targets on the other side. Both shots hit near the center, but it was hard to tell from this distance if they were perfect strikes.
The guard standing to The Mountain’s left remarked, “Shirin is a warrior born! She has earned the respect of the Maghir and has vanquished many in fights. Though you have won me many coin through your games, she I would not bet against,” and the other guard agreed. As they talked Shirin trotted her horse over and appraised her audience and The Mountain appraised her in return.
Shirin was an athletic woman of average height with dark brown hair and hazel eyes. Her face was flushed with excitement as she regarded the men. “Two of them could not have flown truer and the other two only slightly off their mark! You have much work ahead of you Firuz, if you ever hope to match me,” she challenged looking at the guard who had spoken.
Firuz smiled and laughed. “Perhaps someday I will match you in mastery from the back of a horse, but never in spirit. But I am not here to admire your skill with the bow, I bring you, The Mountain! Champion of the arenas, hero of the crusades and friend to children everywhere!” he winked at The Mountain. “We shall be nearby should either of you need us,” and with that the two guards offered their salute and withdrew.
As the guards departed The Mountain looked up at Shirin. “That was great shooting! And you have a wonderful horse. She’s pretty. Can I pet her?” The words tumbled out excitedly as he looked up at her expectantly.
Shirin face contorted through a mixture of annoyance and amusement. “Are you here to see me or my horse?”
The Mountain’s eyes got big and he looked worried, “Oh, I’m sorry! I’m here to see you. At least if you’re Shirin. That’s who I was supposed to see next and here you are and the guards have left, so I’m guessing you’re Shirin. Are you Shirin? And can I pet your horse, please?”
The Mountain’s near babbling just made her laugh, long and hard. He waited through it all, looking up at her expectantly. In an amused voice she granted her consent, “Yes, I am Shirin, and yes, you may pet Batuerdene.”
“Loyal Jewel. A beautiful name for a beautiful horse.”
“So you speak Maghir?”
The Mountain shook his head. “No, but I know a bit of Yhing hir.” He spent a couple of minutes absorbed with the horse, gaining its trust and then petting it gently.
“You ride?”
“Yes, though your skill puts mine to shame. You know the Galloping Rain fighting style?” he asked, shifting his attention from the horse, squarely to the rider.
“You did your homework.”
“No, but I’ve seen it before and was as impressed with it then as I am now. It’s very graceful. And deadly. And fast. But mostly graceful.”
Shirin dismounted from her mount with practiced ease. “She deserves food, water and a good rubdown.”
The Mountain smiled. “Lead and I will follow.”
As they walked to the stables they chatted about the Galloping Rain fighting style and The Mountain’s own approach to combat. He let her know that he was seeking to become a master with his trident and was even working on a new trick. They talked at length about the differences in combat between sport, gladiatorial and warfare. It became clear that while his experience was far greater than hers and more broad, she had a much better knowledge of strategy and tactics easily translating the battles he described and being able to accurately guess what each side would do next. She probed and prodded at both his memory and his thinking on what tactics would have been best and commenting on the ones he employed.
The conversation continued through feeding Batuerdene as well as brushing her down and had evolved to a discussion of the various weapons with which they were acquainted and comfortable with, with only dagger and a light spear being in common. He discovered she had spent time with the Yhing hir, riding the plains and living off the land for a time, too restless with constantly being in the city which led in turn to one upsmanship about difficulties in the wilderness. It was playful, and silly but always with an edge of competition to it.
Shirin looked at him appraisingly as they reached a lull in the conversation. “So. What would you say to a bit of sparring? You have me at a bit of a disadvantage,” she conceded, “being on foot rather than on horseback. You did mention a new trick you were trying to master though…”
The Mountain drew himself up into a dramatic pose. “You? Are challenging me?” he added haughtily as her grin and gaze confirmed. He laughed and dropped back to the familiar man she had been talking to. “Ok. I accept. Not today though,” he added apologetically. “I didn’t think I was going to need to fight while in the Golden Court, so I didn’t bring my gear. Tomorrow?”
“Tomorrow it shall be, and bring your best. I intend to.”
Sensing an end to his conversation, he dropped to one knee in respect. As he did so, she reached out and placed a hand on his shoulder. They stayed that way only briefly before he rose and she withdrew her hand.
“Firuz?” he called.
Very shortly his shadows were back and saluted Shirin. It was a honor she returned.
“Let’s go.”
To be continued….
March 13, 2016 at 6:24 am #271921AnonymousInactiveThis time The Mountain was led to a workshop. Inside a woman stood tools in hand finishing up a bit of detail work on an exquisite saddle. Sensing their presence she put down the tools, smiled warmly and stepped forward. She offered an appropriate gesture of respect, “Welcome. I am Vashti, and well pleased to make your acquaintance.” Her gaze was steady and open. Her hair was a light shade of brown and sun kissed. By height she was the most imposing of those she had met, easily taller than Roshni. She was well, a beautifully worked sleeveless white leather jacket over loose fitting white garments chased in gold. While her ensemble was exquisite, it was practical allowing her to work without impediment and ride without issue.
The Mountain pulled himself up into an arena pose. “I am… The Mountain,” he announced, returning her warm greeting. At a nod from Vashti, the two guards withdrew, leaving the two to their discussion.
Looking at the saddle, The Mountain’s eyes went wide. “Wow! That’s very pretty. Did you do all that?” and he looked at her expectantly. If the question troubled her, it didn’t show in her demeanor or answer. She smiled without indulgence or condescension.
“Yes. I am a master leatherworker and devote my craft to gear for horses. I get to combine two of my loves.”
“You made your jacket though, right?”
“Why do you say that?” Vashti asked curiously.
“The flourish on your collar. That’s like that point,” and he pointed at a section of the saddle trim.
Vashti smiled and looked impressed. “Good eye. Yes, I made the jacket. I do things for myself and on occasion for others. It’s a nice change of pace and a challenge.”
She considered The Mountain. “Do you ride?”
The Mountain shrugged. “Yes, but not well.”
“Allow me to share my joy with you and provide a few tips that could help make your future travels, easier,” the pitch was easy and hard to refuse.
“Ok. Sounds like fun. Where do we get horses?” he looked around as if expecting that they would appear in the room.
Vashti smiled broadly, “Come. I know where we can find some.” She rested a handly lightly on his arm and pointed to a different door. “This way.”
“Um, Firuz? We’re going off riding. Ok?”
The guard moved through the door when The Mountain called out and nodded. “We will await your return here.” Firuz looked at Vashti. “If it would be better for us to meet him elsewhere, send word.”
She inclines her head in acknowledgement. “Of course, Firuz. We will be some time, so feel free to seek refreshments while we’re gone.”
Firuz nods his thanks.
Vashti applies only the slightest pressure on The Moutain’s arm to guide him towards the door and off they went. The journey wasn’t overly long. Eventually they reached the stables. “Select your mount from among these,” as they walked past a variety. There were impressive looking stallions and as they passed the first one Vashti smiled. “A fine stallion, three years with impressive strength and speed,” The horse snorted and The Mountain nodded his consideration though kept walking. A few more down the line a gorgeous bay caught his eye.
“Excellent eye!” Vashti commented, “She’s a favorite of the Golden Court and often taken out. She runs like the wind itself.” Once again he nodded and moved on. They moved past more than a dozen other horses with Vashti providing a comment or encouragement before The Mountain stopped. He stood before a large black stallion though notably older than the others. He considered for a moment.
“This one.”
She looked at him curiously. “Why this one?”
The Mountain looked at her like a very serious child, “This one is older and wiser.”
“Oh?”
“There’s a bit of silver in his coat and he seems nicer. And he’s big and strong enough for me,” he concluded.
Vashti nodded then smiled. “Older and wiser it is. Meet Batmognke, prized stallion of Delgerzorig who along with his fellow Takomir rode down and broke the final line of invading demons guarding the gates of Jappa.”
The Mountain reached out his hand for Batmognke to become familiar with him before reaching up to pet him. “He’s a nice horse.”
She laughed. “And more mellow now than during the war. Come let us be off.”
Vashti gathered tack and harness for both the stallion and her mare before they made their way off. Their conversation was engaged and animated and ranged from horses to his travels to her business and that of her family. She seemed more interested in the places he had gone and the people he had met than with the fights he’d had along the way. She asked about the chain he wore and he happily told her the story. It was done with the same gusto as earlier, though far less acrobatics as they rode rather than being on foot.
At times during the conversation she would alter the pace or shift a bit suddenly, though gracefully. Though hard to distinguish at first, it became more apparent that they were tests of his abilities and she began providing suggestions for how better to respond.
“Are you testing me?” The Mountain asked after yet another odd shifts.
Vashti grinned and smiled. “Just feeling out your limits and potential. You seem to have the natural grace and talent to excel, though appear little used to riding.”
“That’s true,” he replied nodding solemnly.
Eventually they returned to the stables and passed off their horses to grooms to care for. As they approached the room where they met, Vashti stopped and looked up at The Mountain.
“May I ask a question?”
“Uh, didn’t you just do that? And you’ve asked lots, so why ask about asking?”
She smiled at the humor. “What are you looking for?”
The Mountain looked at her blankly. “What do you mean?”
“Our meeting today, meetings with others. I understand you may wed one of those you spend time with. So, what are you looking for?”
“Someone who sees me as me,” he stated firmly and nodded.
“And what do you offer in return?”
“Why, being me!” he then realized she might be referring to something else. “Oh! Do you mean like gifts? Gifts are nice. I could get you one. Is that what you’re talking about?”
Vashti shook her head. “It’s important to be a good judge of character as a merchant. There is more to you than our conversation would warrant. You have excellent instincts such as with Batmongke or aren’t as…” she paused reconsidering her words.
“Yes?”
“You grasp things or react more quickly than many might expect.”
“Oh?”
Vashti smiled and placed a hand lightly on his arm and with slight pressure they resumed their walk. As they returned to the room she looked at him. “Shall we meet again? I don’t feel like we’ve reached an understanding yet, and I would hate to leave unfinished business.”
The Mountain nodded. “Ok.”
She rested her hand on his arm, “Until then,” she said.
He nodded and called out for his escort who promptly opened the door.
“Good bye!” he returned and then followed Firuz towards where he would meet the last of the women, Nasha had arranged for.
To be continued…
March 13, 2016 at 6:26 am #271922AnonymousInactiveI looked again at Shirin’s scene after thinking it might have been a bit short. I believe I’ll keep it the way it is and simply add the pieces I would have added to it there to the next scene.
March 15, 2016 at 12:37 pm #271932AnonymousInactiveFiruz and Parviz led The Mountain through the Palace and up to a large library. Within was a woman more formally dressed than the others he met, though the clothes seemed designed to be comfortable and not hamper movement. She stood at a table, various scrolls and tomes spread out, quill in hand making notes and engrossed in her work. Oblivious to their arrival, The Mountain had a few moments to study her.
She moved with purpose, hands reaching to different materials before making additional notes. Her black hair was pulled back and kept away from her eyes by a jeweled hair pin. Her intensity added to her presence and bearing. Her bare arms pointed to a more active lifestyle than the present setting suggested. Almost overlooked was an ornate, though ancient looking scimitar hanging from a belt on the chair behind her. While exquisite, its craftsmanship spoke to a weapon made to be used rather than simply worn.
“I am, The Mountain,” he announced in a quieter voice in deference to his surroundings. Having announced his presence he dropped to a knee as a sign of respect. The guards were also more precise in their salute, their respect evident.
She looked up, eyes quickly moving to take in the newcomers and came to some assessment. Pulling herself to her full height she stood as tall as any he had met, perhaps even taller. She projected a sense of authority and her eyes shone with intelligence. She smiled politely. “Greetings The Mountain. I am Ruana, Loremaster of the Maghir, assistant to Kaveh. I am pleased to meet you.”
The Mountain grinned as he stood. “Me too.” His eyes strayed to the table with all the books, manuscripts and scrolls.
“Tell me, what…”Ruana’s question was cut off as The Mountain moved over to the table.
“Wow! Lots of books with squiggles,” The Mountain moved around then sighed. “None with pictures,” he concluded sadly.
The interruption and being ignored didn’t go over well with Ruana especially given The Mountain’s commentary. She looked poised to issue an angry retort and then stopped and watched him closely. He continued to stare at the various documents at all sorts of angles, scanning to make sure he hadn’t missed any illustrations.
“Are you unfamiliar with the written word?” The Mountain looked up confused. “The squiggles?” She stared deep into his eyes as he nodded. “And you’d like to see…pictures?” Her voice was cool and detatched, though not cold. He nodded again. “Very well.”
Ruana moved to the table and scanned across the various works. She rolled an ancient scroll to a different part, showing what might have been a depiction of the First City from ages past, though impossible to tell if real or imagined. The Mountain immediately became interested and moved over to review. Watching him she moved to another work – this one a folio, and found a battle scene focused on an impressive man wielding vast elemental power. She repeated the process until she had a half dozen illustrations of varying sizes laid out on the work table, then stepped back to allow him to examine them.
With each of the illustrations, The Mountain approached the work from the correct angle as it was clear which way it should be viewed. Through his process as he studied them, she studied him. As he neared the fifth illustration he asked, “So what is it that you’re learning about?”
Ruana had calmed down from her initial irritation and her voice was neutral when she replied. “I’m interested in the fall of the First Imperium and the state of the empire before the Theocracy of the Cleansing Flame swept to power. Large portions of the city were destroyed during the time of Leonydas val’Virdan, but before it the city was intact. Much of that original city is still here in the various levels of ruins and debris.”
She moved to the picture of the man wielding vast power. “Before the fall of the last Imperator, he had at his disposal a cadre of magicians that served him whose descendants became known as the Eryunellian Battle Mages. It was a time before the coming of the Sorcerer King of Ymmandragore, when the use of such powers were not considered anathema or heretical. It is an interesting time in history for as much as the churches’ teachings speak of the use of that power being a usurpation of the gods’ will and pure hubris, it was an accepted part of the fabric of life within the Imperial Court.”
She looks across the various documents as if seeking something. “Buried somewhere I believe are the keys to understanding the complex history of the interaction of priests and sorcerers. What caused the Battle Mages to fall out of favor? Was it the failure to protect the last Imperator? Was it their failure against the Myrantian Hegemony and were they blamed for the destruction caused by the war? Was it the hubris of the Sorcerer King and him being responsible for the beginning of the Time of Terror? Could it be that the churches were always against that channeling of the god’s power, but the will of the Imperators shielded them to operate as they saw fit? Was use of magic by those others that priests accepted by the population at large or were they feared even then?”
Ruana shrugged. “So little survived the time of Terror and then the Sorcerer King’s harvesting of both people and things of power, that there is little to go on. I have worked out a deal with Ambassador Tukufu who’s the proprietor at the Litera Scripta Manet to share research as well as access to rare tomes in the interest of discovering more about the Imperium of Man. These” as she gestured at the various works on the table, “are all I have been able to find discussing those times. The Ambassador has graciously offered to forward me any related works for a small fee of course. However, as interesting as that time and that particular peculiarity is, there is much to the ruins to be discovered of the heritage of at least five previous empires living here.”
Her voice had gained strength and passion, and both were clearly dear topics to her.
“Do the Eryuni…men Battle Mages still exist?” asked The Mountain, caught up in her tale.
She eyed him once more and shrugged. “It is said the last perished in fighting the Sorcerer King and the Myrantian Necromancer Lords. It’s possible that their descendants yet found sanctuary somewhere, hidden away from the plight of their brethren and away from the vast destruction the Time of Terror brought on. They would be a very interesting find as would any ruins or relics from their past. Sadly, any remains of note most likely can be found in the dusty tombs of Myrantia or upon the Isle of Tears.”
“Can you go and get the stuff from the dusty tombs? A good broom would get rid of the dust and make the stuff you’re looking for easier to find.”Ruana looks at The Mountain a bit incredulously and then chuckles. “The capital of the Myrantian Hegemony sank into the Kraldjur Morass near the border between the Malfaelen’s of the Fellglade and the Ss’ethregoran Empire. It would be a bit hazardous to get there.”
The Mountain’s eyes got big. “More than a bit! Walking between two people fighting is a bad idea and walking between a lot of two people fighting a REALLY bad idea,” The Mountain moved away from the table and stared at the far wall. “Wars are dangerous places,” he noted thoughts far away.
She regarded him for a moment before walking over to him. “Why don’t we sit?” and she gestured to where a set of chairs and couches were arranged for a discussion.
“Ok,” and he walked over and took a seat on a couch. Ruana followed and sat in a chair opposite from him making talking easier.
“You fought in the 6th Crusade of Light as part of Count Felix’s Irregulars, correct?”
“Yes.”
“Do you want to talk about it?”
“I may be good at fighting, but I don’t like war. Too many people die.”
Ruana nodded sympathetically.
Switching topics, The Mountain gestured to the scimitar. “Have you used that?”
It took her a moment to place the question in context. “Yes. I have helped sponsor expeditions into the undercity and elsewhere. Often I go along to see what I can learn or find. Lots of times the journeys are fruitless, empty corridors and rooms, dusty or damp or filled with mud. At times though we find new inhabitants who don’t like their homes or nests disturbed.”
She goes over and recovers the scimitar. “This is an heirloom that has been passed down from generation to generation and kept by the Loremasters of the Maghir. We are defenders of our people and more importantly the ways of our people. I have used it the defense of myself and others.”
“Keeping people safe is good.”
Ruana nodded. “I find it curious that Nasha thought I might be a good match for you. Why do you think that might be?”
“You’re good at telling stories, right?”
“Yeeesss….”
“I love good stories!” The Mountain adds with a bit of excitement, the somberness transforming into happiness once again.
She just looks at him. “Anything else?”
“Well, I like to travel and help people. So I go a lot of different places and find all sorts of strange things. I’ve been to the Haina Empire, through Almeric, Milandir, the Coryani Empire, the Hinterlands, the,” she cuts him off before he continues to run down what might be a very long list.
“I see. Do you like to tell stories?”
“Uh huh! I have all sorts of stories. Do you want to hear them?”
Ruana settles more comfortably into her chair. “Please.”
“Ok! So this necklace is a champion’s chain. I got this after beating a REALLY BIG ss’ressen. He was even bigger than me, though not by a lot. Both of us had beaten a lot of opponents to get to the end. And there we were, he with his axe and me with my trident. The battle was really tough! It wasn’t supposed to be to the death, but he wouldn’t give up and I didn’t want to die. He killed all of his other opponents. That’s sad. So we started out by waving to the crowd…”
For the second time that day he launched into a beloved and often told tale. From there he spoke of different adventures he had been on and the places he’d visited as well as the unusual people and creatures he’d encountered. At first Ruana just listened, but as he got further along in his storytelling she began asking more questions, probing at details and descriptions of places, people, the languages they spoke or how the speech sounded. He was sometimes able to remember a word or phrase from the conversations. Though not always clear what the words originally were, Ruana was able to identify each one. At a lull she seemed pensive.
“You have given me a lot to think on, The Mountain. Thank you,” and with that she stood up. “It is getting late and I believe we both have things we need to do.”
The Mountain stood as well, then dropped to a knee in respect. “Thank you for the time as well,” before standing back up.
“Can we talk again?” he asked her. “I’d like to hear some of your stories.”
Ruana nodded. “That would be nice,” she decided.
The Mountain smiled and headed for the door. As he stepped through he glanced back and saw her at the table moving one of the tomes that she had opened to an illustration had badly creased one of the folio pages below it. Cursing quietly she moved the book on top and slowly smoothed out the page below with her hand. When she was done it was if the crease had never been there. She glanced up as The Mountain finished moving through the door, aware that he had likely seen what she had done. He shut the door and looked at Firuz and Parviz.
“Can we get something to eat? I’m hungry,” and as if on queue his belly rumbled.
“Of course, The Mountain,” Firuz responded. “I expect you’ve had a busy day and with that they headed back towards the kitchens for a late dinner.
To be continued…
March 16, 2016 at 6:48 am #271946frootsnaxParticipantStill good! And I even geta shout out to Tukufu.
But what’s the secret The Mountain whispered to Nasha in the beginning? I’ve wracked my mind but can’t come with anything better than “And she must love dogs.”
I’m pretty sure that’s not it.March 16, 2016 at 11:34 am #271947AnonymousInactiveStill good! And I even geta shout out to Tukufu.
But what’s the secret The Mountain whispered to Nasha in the beginning? I’ve wracked my mind but can’t come with anything better than “And she must love dogs.”
I’m pretty sure that’s not it.Eric,
It seemed hardly fitting to include a scholar living in the First City whose unaware of Tukufu! Likewise I would hope that should music be the subject Vincens or at least his Academy would come to mind as well.
I’m glad you’re still enjoying the story. Right now I’m about a third of the way through telling it at least in terms of “scenes.” Not sure how long in terms of actual word count. I’ve sketched out in a couple sentences each of the next 10 chunks and would guess there are probably another 5ish and an epilogue beyond that.
As for what The Mountain shared with Nasha, that will come out much more clearly over the next 10. There are hints within the story so far that I hope at a minimum will be able to be put in context in hindsight. He is taking risks in going through this process and sharing any secret requires trust especially given the limited time frame he has to work with. The introductions gave each party a chance to feel out the other and get more of a sense of why they were there. Each realizes to some extent that they were picked and has to ask themselves, why them? amongst other questions.
One thing I’m striving for is that all the notable NPCs have plans, ambitions, and a story that this one is simply interacting with. Ideally I’ll bring them to life enough that the choices they make make sense for them, even if they’re not the ones the reader would make. I’m currently working on the impressions of The Mountain that each woman was left with after their initial encounter and will likely do the same for him. The impressions and questions they have will shape how the next encounter goes.
The end isn’t written yet except in the broadest sense. Writing through the next sections will provide more clarity to us where the story’s going and how it will end. I have some other work to do that I want to get done this week that will eat into my time to work on this story, so I expect the pace of posting will slow until I’m through that. For the delays I ask your patience.
With a sweep of his hat,
Paul
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