[Contest] Parade of Heroes

Took a look at Vikisan val’Dellenov…

– It looks like he has a +2 to all defenses factored into the character sheet, but it’s not listed as one of his advancements on the build sheet.

– Step 7: I believe that Vukisan has 6 points to spend (3+1+2) but has actually spent 7. (The +2 to Mettle should cost 3, not 2. That’s probably where the mistake comes from.)

– By my calculations, Melee (Unarmed) should be a 4, not a 5.

Scott

Windseeker:
(If I’m right, correcting most of these mistakes will benefit your character.)

– According to the build sheet, you only spent 37 out of 40 points on attributes. Also, after adding in the two advancement options, I think you have some adjustments that you need to make…

     Base  Race  Background  Advancements  Final  (Listed)
Mi   5                                      5       5
Pr   5                                      5       5
Qu   7     1                                8       8
Vi   4            1          1              6       5
Ch   4                       1              5       4
In   4                       1              5       4
Lo   4                                      3       4
Re   3                       1              4       3

– Step 7: Spent 8 points, but only have 7.

– Skills: I think I see a few mistakes, here…

Battle -             Should be 5, not 3.
Melee (Unbalanced) - Should be 2, not 0.
Mettle -             Should be 2, not 0.
Heal -               Should be 0, not 2.
Linguistics -        Should be 2, not 0.
Perception -         Should be 2, not 3.

(However, this will change a bit if you have to remove a skill due to overspending on step 7.)

Scott

I think Sleg may need to adjust his attributes and skills slightly.

According to his build sheet, I see the following for attributes:

     Base  Race  Background  Huge  Advancement 1.4  Final  (Listed)
Mi   7     1                 1                       9       9
Pr   6           1                 1                 8       8
Qu   5                             1                 6       5
Vi   3                                               3       5
Ch   3                                               3       3
In   4                                               4       5
Lo   3                                               3       3
Re   3                                               3       3

And in Step 2, I see that Unarmed was trained twice. I’m not 100% certain of this, but I believe that you must choose 3 separate skills.

And in step 7 (Skills) Sleg has 7 skill points to assign, but only six skills are listed. Additionally, see my comment about Unarmed, above. And I don’t see where Thrown is trained prior to step 7. I’m not sure if this is actually a problem, though, because training a trained skill by 1 or an untrained skill by 1 still only costs one. It’s the fact that only 6 skills are listed combined with the problem with Unarmed that make me unsure of whether or not this is accurate. In total, I think the skills may need some tweaking.

Scott

ok i’m working on fixing that… but was wondering if the Gladiator Background is ok for Him… as i’ve been told that my be an issue by a friend… wanted to clear that up before i start working on him as revised….

ok i’m working on fixing that… but was wondering if the Gladiator Background is ok for Him… as i’ve been told that my be an issue by a friend… wanted to clear that up before i start working on him as revised….

Yeah…. That might be an issue. Black Talon S’sressen are supposed to be from Milandir (the Sulfur Marsh.) But the Former Gladiator background specifies that the Nationality must be, “Almeric, Coryani Empire or Hinterlands.” So that might be a problem. Ghost Scale S’sressen can be from Almeric, Coryan or Milandir (as well as Abessios), though. So maybe Ghost scale would work? (Although I don’t remember if Ghost Scale S’sressen are campaign legal.)

Scott

Ghost Scales = Campaign Legal.
Ashen Hides = NOT Legal.

Which has always bugged me. The Ashen Hides reside in Canceri but, from what I’ve read, don’t seem to be part of Canceri – they’re pretty much separate in the same way Dwarf enclaves are separate from the nation where they physically reside (but that doesn’t change the fact that they’re not campaign legal)…

Battle, Mettle, and Athletics are from Seasoned Veteran. Milandisian Gothic Curiass is free from the background. Aviodance: +2 to all defenses advancement, +1 from human, and +1 from Defensive rune
Ah, I see that, now. Thank you.

Wow, what a background! (Ooh! I want to play a, “genome”! My avoidance would be unbeatable!)

Scott

Working with scott alpen, will have an update by tuesday

Good deal. I would hate to see anyone who put effort in to get booted without having a chance to fix problems.